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Tuesday, April 29, 2025

elemental, DH Lawrence

  

Why don’t people leave off being lovable

Or thinking they are lovable, or wanting to be lovable,

And be a bit elemental instead?


Since man is made up of the elements

Fire, and rain, and air, and live loam

And none of these is lovable

But elemental,

Man is lop-sided on the side of the angels.


I wish men would get back their balance among the elements

And be a bit more fiery, as incapable of telling lies

As fire is.

I wish they’d be true to their own variation, as water is,

Which goes through all the stages of steam and stream and ice

Without losing its head.


I am sick of lovable people,

Somehow they are a lie. 




D.H. Lawrence

1929 



____ however ....


Fire rain air is the stuff

Of poetry, call it love 

Give grace by candle

Light drink or moat the accumulated cloud

Inhale or soon die air 

Join loam or be conscripted 

It sold a chapbook in 1929 money next to 

Alms say grace master surveil 

If your life don't worship dirt

Prepare for plastic worse 

Elemental made too, boom 













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